tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791627534948029969.post903479029314997599..comments2013-11-29T13:59:42.975-08:00Comments on Long Island City Journals: You're 16, You're Beautiful and You're a VoterProf. T.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791627534948029969.post-4700257024350031392013-10-14T13:50:35.259-07:002013-10-14T13:50:35.259-07:00got it,, got it,, Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10884927501485911751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791627534948029969.post-7317177003676576022013-10-11T09:29:29.265-07:002013-10-11T09:29:29.265-07:00Better! See how using the subject/verb "she s...Better! See how using the subject/verb "she states" like we discussed in class makes it a lot clearer? <br /><br />What is the difference here between "could" and "should"? Which do you think she means?Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791627534948029969.post-25691962743376161402013-10-10T15:41:46.953-07:002013-10-10T15:41:46.953-07:00In the passage which written by Anya Kamenetz, she...In the passage which written by Anya Kamenetz, she states that teenagers could be voter as 16 years old.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10884927501485911751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5791627534948029969.post-33925898508465994732013-10-09T11:02:37.712-07:002013-10-09T11:02:37.712-07:00Look at your first sentence: "In the passage ...Look at your first sentence: "In the passage which written by Anya Kamenetz, as saying that teenagers could be voter as 16 years old." Your main verb is "saying" Who is doing the saying? Can you rewrite it so this is clearer? <br />Good job using cause an effect in the second paragraph.<br />Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.com